FIU Admission Essay Medicine Admission Services - Admission Essay

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About me: I work in the trauma intensive care unit at Level 1 Trauma Center in Miami, Fl. I have been a RN for about a year and a half. I deal with patients suffering from a wide range of traumatic injuries and complications.
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Question 1:
A primary professional experience that influenced my decision to pursue CRNA school was when I took care of a patient that was in a severe motor vehicle accident. She suffered from severe pelvic and abdominal injuries which led her to have an open abdomen. She appeared to be in agonizing pain during dressing changes. I noticed she did not have any sedation and/or analgesia for these dressing changes. Doctors rationale for this was that she would become addicted to these medications and not improve lung function while on the ventilator. I brought the team to the bedside so they can re-evaluate her pain and sedation levels. Finally after careful evaluation, the team prescribed appropriate analgesia and sedation medications as needed. In this moment where I advocated for my ventilated patient I felt good that I provided some relief to her suffering. I believe that sedation and/or analgesia can really provide therapeutic relief and let the body heal, in the appropriate situation especially before a procedure or operation and that is one of the reasons why im choosing a path in CRNA.
Question 2:
As I became more acclimated to this challenging unit I grew to be vigiliant with my patients and my responsibilities, I advocated and protected my patients, I learned to use resources efficiently and communicated more directly and decisive. This was a personal growth for me and I believe these qualities were highlighted more and more as I gained experience.
Professionally I have prepared myself by shadowing various CRNA's in the hospitals main OR. I learned and observed all operative phases. I saw how critical their role and duties were in each operative phase. I also was a research assistant in NIH funded study that aimed to prevent delirium in ICU mechanically ventilated patients. I spread awareness about delirium to my colleagues and how we can use evidence-based practice guidelines to decrease delirium thereby decreasing ICU stay.
Question 3:
What I see myself doing in 5 years is being a proficient and safe CRNA that is ready to serve her community. I wish to practice under the best evidence-based guidelines. My passion and love for trauma will always remain as well. I would like to see myself working in a trauma OR or if not work in a hospital set in an underserved urban area where patients present with complex injuries and illnesses.