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A good write up keeps the reader with the urge to read more and get new insights. It is paramount to note that, any writer should always aspire to make his /her paper as detailed as possible, not leaving any gaps or hanging statement that may confuse the reader. In the paper titled polluted insight, there are a number of things that were really done well, making the paper look professional and outstanding in the way concepts and ideas are presented. One of the things that are profound and well presented in the paper is coherency. From the beginning to the end, there is coherency in the way information is presented. The writer follows systematic approach of presenting facts and information, making it easy for the reader to follow. The other factor that is of importance is the relevancy of information presented. The writer succinctly talks about pollution in the lake and how it affects both plants and animals. The arguments presented are supported with literature and diagrams/images.
The question I will have to this writer is an evidence of how many people have been affected by pollutants on the lake and what the current achievements stand at. The two major improvements I would suggest on this write up are: in-text citation and curren...