Orthodontic Treatment Experience That Sparked Interest in Dentistry

Please rewrite/ paraphrase/ edit my paragraphs that talks about my orthodontic treatment experience that inspires me to pursue a career in dentistry.
Recognizing my insecurity, my parents took me to an orthodontist when I was 12. Much to our surprise, the doctor explained after taking a good look at my X-ray films: “Not all underbites can be corrected with braces alone”- that I would need a jaw surgery when I’m older. For the longest time, I naively believed that braces alone would be enough to grant me the smile of my dreams in a matter of years. I sat terrified as my orthodontist portrayed how an oral surgeon would dislodged my jaws, adding a few screws and plates to correct their alignments. Discovering that achieving my desired smile would require more time than expected was disheartening, yet the doctor’s words piqued my curiosity.
As an impatient child eager to get her teeth aligned as soon as possible, my brain was filled with questions. What made my case so special from others that I would need to wait that long. Why were my jaws affected? Are there other solutions that don't involve this surgery? His constant reassurance that the waiting would be worthwhile soothed my anxiety, but it was his reasoning through the waiting and how it would lead to the best outcome for my smile that had left a lasting impression on me. Just like a clock, it is easy to overlook a minor change in the bite of the teeth that can later set off a chain reaction of issues. How something so small and simple as your tooth can play such an important role in the functional role of your teeth. His unwavering support and expertise fascinated me that initially drew me towards dentistry.
Six months later during a recent FaceTime call with my parents, they asked to see a glimpse of my progress. We were all amazed by the progress, but I was even more fascinated with how a few metal wires and rubber bands had transformed my once a crime scene of teeth, that I was only a year or two away from my dream smile. It was a truly remarkable experience to witness firsthand the incredible impact the work of my orthodontist can have on enhancing people's smiles, restoring their confidence, and boosting their self-esteem. That profound moment served as my definitive answer to the question of why I want to pursue a career in dentistry - where my dental care can help give others the confidence and pride I felt coming with a bright and healthy smile, while being able to develop personal relationships with my patients over the years of treatment.